Update!

Okay, so I may have lied a little about not posting with regularity. Turns out this has had a more positive effect on my writing than I thought, and I have already written the next part of the story (I'm going to continue on with this crime type story until I run out of ideas). So, I present the next installment: 'Dawn'. Sorry for the shortness of it, but it makes the rest of it flow better if I end it where it ends.